Friday, September 19, 2008

Critique This Blog #10: Travels With Children


Today we're critiquing Travels with Children, by Linda, a.k.a. minnemom. Linda is a mother of four who lives on a farm in southern Minnesota and likes to take her kids on travel adventures--so much, in fact, that she started a blog about it. Here's what Linda would like feedback on:

  • Is there too much information/text on the page?
  • Are the columns too narrow? If so, and I'd switch to a 3-column format, which sidebar sections could be left out?
  • I have three different navigation tools available (list of sites, drop-down box, and search box). Which would you tend to use, and which would be most disposable?
  • Thoughts on writing and/or content? As a reader, what would you like to see more of?
Readers?

Oh, and I've got a few open critique slots coming up. If you'd like your blog critiqued, are a registered member of the BlogCoach Community and have been blogging for six months or more, shoot me an email.

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